Sylvia Frostmourne - Slytherin

[Sylvia Frostmourne]

Name: Sylvia Frostmourne
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Blood: Pure Blood
House: Slytherin
Wood: Redwood
Size: 9 3/4 inch
Core: Phoenix Feather
Description:

Sylvia has beautiful red hair, it flows down past her shoulders and lays flat and settled. Even if she tried to curl it, it still remains a bit flat and settled. She has beautiful dark brown eyes, that seem to shimmer and shine when you look at them. Sylvia has slightly untouched features, meaning her skin is silky soft and without imperfections. Although she does have a few scars, that her parents try to convince her to keep hidden with magic, But she tends to forget that when she isn't around them.

She isn't a very tall girl and looks as skinny as a model, many would think that she has a problem with eating, But she really doesn't. Her parents take pride in keeping her thin and in shape, not a bit over weight as it simply wouldn't do with her modelling.

She enjoys wearing designer dresses and designer pant suits.. never going for anything that isn't simply the most adorable outfit ever. She keeps her hair down, letting it flow down her back and swaying as she walks around, tickling her lower back at each movement.

Personality:

Sylvia is a diva, she believes she is a goddess and deserves to be treated as such. She enjoys talking about herself, and rather enjoys when others talk about her as well. She takes pride in her looks, and doesnt like to speak to people that dont do the same. If they dont keep up with themselves, then they are not worthy to speak to her.

Sylvia is very spoiled and very rude, she knows how to get around the rules and bend them. When she is in fear of being caught by a professor she will gladly use anyone as a reason for anything that she is doing. Even if they are not with her at the time, she will gladly say that, she was running away from them or something.

Sylvia is also a smart child, she loves messing around with magic. She especially likes the dark magic spells and hexes and jinxs. She dreams about using them on other students, But so far she doesn't think she can get away with such a big thing, So she rather keep and study about them and learn them better before striking, Silent and deadly.

History:

Sylvia Frostmourne was born on October 31st, at exactly 11:11 in the evening. She was born into a pureblood wizarding family, her parents being Mercedes and Johnathan Frostmourne. With no other siblings in her family, Sylvia was instantly spoiled by the rich mother and father. She had everything from toys to clothes that other kids would envy, as well as other parents. She was always dressed in little dresses and tights, and cute little ballerina shoes as a baby. Her parents adored her greatly, and took pride in showing off their beautiful pureblood child. The Frostmourne family was a widely known pureblood family, being known as death eaters, even though most people believed nothing of the name anymore. Ofcourse, Johnathan and Mercedes both understood its meaning and what was expected of them and their child when she came of age.

As Sylvia reached her toddler years, her parents wasted no time before they enrolled her into a modelling agency. They believed her to be so beautiful that the whole world needed to see her beauty. She was accepted and through her toddler years she was a model, wearing all sorts of designer clothing whether in a shot or not. Ofcourse this led to a change in the girls personality, she believed she was like a goddess, Something that was untouchable and highly attractive and needed looked at, needed to be the center of attention.

A sense of curiousity struck the child when she turned her eleventh year, She was growing further and further curious over her magic abilities and the things that she would learn from Hogwarts. So it was no easy thing to keep the child away from the letter when she received it just before turning eleven. She absolutely was looking forward to going to hogwarts, and pestered her parents over her need to get all the things that she thought she needed for school.

Going on a major shopping spree with her mother a few months before her ride to the train, she bought all sorts of designer things. She got a broom, and many many different sets of clothing, designer quills and fancy paper to write upon in classes and even seperate ones to write on when sending letters to family or friends. They even got her a fancy white snow owl, with whom Sylvia absolutely adored. When the days closed in the family took the child to the train, and waved her off as she made her journey to Hogwarts, and her journey to the rest of her life.

Acceptance Letter: eristd

[bane]

Unfortunately, this character cannot be accepted yet. There are a few problems I noticed in your character application.

As Sylvia reached her toddler years, her parents wasted no time before they enrolled her into a modelling agency. They believed her to be so beautiful that the whole world needed to see her beauty. She was accepted and through her toddler years she was a model, wearing all sorts of designer clothing whether in a shot or not. Ofcourse this led to a change in the girls personality, she believed she was like a goddess, Something that was untouchable and highly attractive and needed looked at, needed to be the center of attention.

First thing, many pure blood families didn't really get involved in muggle buisness. For example Arther Weasly did not understand muggle currency. And even if you were to argue it would be wizard wear, wizards don't really look into fashion much, such as the guy in the Quidditch cup who wore a dress. If she was a muggleborn or a halfblood it can be argued a bit more, however because of her pureblood status I have to say she cannot have a past model experience. You mention her modeling in other areas as well. I suggest you fix that.

Going on a major shopping spree with her mother a few months before her ride to the train, she bought all sorts of designer things. She got a broom, and many many different sets of clothing, designer quills and fancy paper to write upon in classes and even seperate ones to write on when sending letters to family or friends. They even got her a fancy white snow owl, with whom Sylvia absolutely adored. When the days closed in the family took the child to the train, and waved her off as she made her journey to Hogwarts, and her journey to the rest of her life.

The first thing I would like to say, is that you shouldn't use shopping for supplies as a history. I recommend you do something more meaningful for your character. You could say stories about how she would be nasty to muggle children and when her magic would go off bad things would happen to them or something. Also since you are shopping, you need to get those things at the shops. When you make your characters you do not automatically have unlimited funds, you have roughly amount for the supplies you need. You do not have enough for fancy items unless you get more galleons through rping. I would also like to point out that first years are not allowed to have brooms.

The last and finial issue is with the acceptance letter, it is incorect and I sugest you review the Rules, and find the correct acceptance letter.

(Sorry if i sound really mean pointing out the problems)